Goodbye viewers

Goodbye Viewers Thank you for a lot of comments this year this year has been one of My favorite years in my entire school life. My favorite bit this year This year Is everything because I loved all the moments i had this year with 2 Great teachers an a supportive family and also My favorite people of all My Beautiful Friends but also you guys too

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My washing powder experiment

Today my whole literacy group went outside and tried an experiment to see what washing powder works better supreme or Persil. We also tried another product and it was water. They were all good but 1 of them was the best Click here if you want to see more of my work and if supreme or Persil Is the best.



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Task description: This is about if supreme or Persil is the better one. The cheap one or the expensive one. Also we are looking if they are ripping us off and doing false advertising.

Naomi water cycle

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Task Description: For ch.ch.ch.ch Changes My Extension group learned about water cycles. We learned about condensation, Evaporation and Precipitation. I also did an animation to show my learning. Why we did this is so we can learn how the changing states of matter works.  

Naomi Olympics

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What I thought of the Holes Book/Movie

Today Me and my class watched the movie holes. I really recommend watching this movie also I recommend reading the book first and see all of the changes when you see the book. I really loved the book cause it really makes you think and I gotta say Holes is my favorite book because it really makes you think and when you solve it your like "OOOHH" and it is really funny.

you want the link to the movie please click on this link Holes Movie

Space adventure

Have you been sent off to space before? Well Jake and McKenzie arrived at the museum and looked at the spaceships first, they looked inside and pushed a little button sending them to outer space. What will they do next.  

If you want to read more please click this link Space Adventure

Naomi Fitness Watch Advice blog Olympic

Walt: Think Critically About what you read 


Task Description: I am giving Advice To James Yoddle. His he wants to be a Olympian weight lifter at the 2020 Olympics, but that is not the the problem. He needs a fitness watch but he does not know which one to choose between fit-bit and the Garmin vivo-fit?
Why we learned this is so we could understand false advertising and stop James from doing the wrong thing and buying the wrong watch. How advertising works is by the marketers of a product using advertising to make it sound like they are the best product, and they are better than all of the other products.  You need to be a critical reader to see through false advertising.

Fitbit Ad   Garmin vivo fit here are the Advert's that I viewed to help James Yoddle make his decision.

are zoos good or bad

Task description: What I did now was I had to fill some questions about if people like zoos or not or if they approve that the gorilla got shot.

Naomi superhero (Rebel)

Walt: plan stories with a complete orientation, problem, and resolution

Character Description:

Rebel is actually a good superhero even though her name is like a villain name. She has the power to fly and to shoot ropes out of her hands to trip bad guys so they can’t run away from her and her last power is to teleport so she can go anywhere at anytime.

Story:

As Rebel laid in her bed with a big bowl of ice cream she thought to herself “I feel a little bit bored”. So Rebel raced to her closet got her uniform and got ready. She went outside and flew to auckland city to see if there were any trouble happening at that second.  

That instant Rebel heard an alarm it was coming from the Auckland bank. The evil villain DR Roberts was robbing the bank and everybody was so scared so they ran outside. So Rebel flew down and tried to catch DR Robert  but he was to fast for Rebel. So Rebel used her teleportation to get to the bank and evacuate the people inside.

After getting  the people out of the bank she used her teleportation to get closer to Dr Roberts but then she had nothing to fight with. Then a second later Rebel Just remembered that she had powers to shoot ropes out of her hands. So she shot a rope to tie Dr Roberts feet so he can fall. She teleport-ed to Dr Roberts and got the stolen money from him then returned it to the bank.

So then Rebel was walking to the supermarket when she got a call from the prime minister John key he wanted to reward Rebel. He wanted to reward her for catching Dr Roberts and returning the money that was stolen from him too and also evacuating the harmless people in the bank . So she got a medal for the best superhero in Auckland, New Zealand.

After saving the day Rebel received her medal as she waved goodbye flying in the air. Rebel was so tired she  went straight home laid in her bed with her big bowl of ice cream and waited for the next day to arrive.

Task Description: This task is a writing to match my superhero art for the art gallery next week at Pt England school Auckland,New Zealand. My writing is about a superhero named Rebel but she is made up by me.  Why we are doing at is to match our theme for this term it is (as i see it).

My maori warrior

His heart was pounding as the giant moa chased after him. He felt like he couldn’t move his legs. But luckily he  managed to escape the moa. In the cold forest the Maori warrior still heard the moas voice screeching loudly.  The warrior had interesting tattoos covering his body. His clothes were made with only leaves and feathers. Soon he became so tired and went to sleep on the forest floor.

In the morning the warrior was woken up by a familiar sound. It was the moa. “How did it find me?” he said. It had followed his footprints and used its sense of smell. Once again the warrior ran through the forest. Looking back he could see that the moa was getting closer and closer. His heart was pounding like never before. Running for his life he took a big breath of air before he jumped off a cliff and into the ocean.

Landing in the ocean the warrior struggled to get back to shore. As he stepped out of the water he found some leaves and dried himself clean. But the leaves were poisonous! “OH no!” he screamed before he fainted. After several hours, the warrior woke up to find several moa surrounding him. He felt frightened and quickly stood up. He tried running left, right, up and down but he kept on getting knocked to the middle by the moa.

Suddenly the warrior realised that he was surrounded by mother nature. He thought to himself “I should fight back!”. At that instant the warrior ran to a tree and broke down a sharp branch and started to point it at the moa. He swung the branch like a taiaha. But the warrior only killed one moa. The rest ran back into the forest. The warrior was lucky to survive.

Naomi Problem Solving Practice Term 2 Wk6

Superhero writing

In a peaceful village iron man was relaxing until he got a phone call from his teammates, he got a call saying “ Iron man we need you quick the ultron’s have invaded earth. Oh No how could this happen. Iron man rushed to his closet grabbed his suit and got quickly dressed. Racing out to the city iron man saw heaps of spaceships. “ Avengers Assemble” Hawk eye said.

“ We need to get the people away from the spaceships and the ultron robots” scarlet said, Pow hawk eye shot from his arrow hitting the robots. “ quicksilver use your super-speed to wrap the robots together” captain america said with a loud voice. They all raced to the spaceships and tried to destroy the ultron’s. The ultron’s were so slow so the avengers had to go to the next bunch.

“ There are too much robots do you think we can defeat them all” captain america said frighteningly . They had no choice but to use their secret ability it is to use all of their powers at the same time and put it all into Thor's hammer. “ It is too dangerous we might die” black widow said with a frown.  “ it’s our only hope” hawk-eye said “ OK let's do it” scarlet said.

So they all did it and put their powers into Thor's hammer, BOOM!! The ground was shaking.  Thor hit the ground with his hammer he tried his best. It was so foggy they couldn't see if the robots were defeated or not. They look around and they saw no robots just defeated ones that are on the ground. “YAY we did it without dieing” black widow said.

“Let’s celebrate on me” thor said happily, they all went to the acade “oh no some kid got his hands stuck in the bowling ball. “ I will get the butter” captain america said then they all laughed” hahahaha”. So they all lived with joy after defeating the robots. THE END

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descriptive writing

Mr Goodwin's new car

Walt: write a what you imagin mr goodwin's car look's like

Description of the car

RMMM RMMM Mr Goodwin's new car is grey like the clouds at night and it can connect Mr G’s music from his phone without any cords, it also has 5 seats with a tv at the top and has 4 cup holders 2 in the front and 2 at the back. It is tall as a  tree and can go 75 mph and has a cool boot with heaps of messy stuff in there but it can hold 5 fold up chairs and 2 suitcases. His car is subaru and it cost $2,785 and it is not a rip off if it has a tv in it.

The story of the car

As I was strolling through Glen Innes I saw the coolest car in the universe,  even though we live in a cheap suburb. I’ve always wanted to buy a new car as grey as clouds, hey wake up wake up

Oh it was just a dream. “No it’s not it is real you are looking at my new car i brought it was not cheap,  it’s your teacher the one who has BIG muscles do you remember me?

Yes of course the dude who teaches me in class with the big muscles bigger then Mr Moran’s. “May I show off”,said Mr G. I said,”SURE”. I tell him to give me 2 seconds “Yeah”,He said. I turn around and make a Jealousy face. “ Wow “ this is the coolest car ever “ Mr can you pick me up and drop me off from school every day now” i said “ i would love to but you're too smelly to put in the car”.

Task description: what i had to do was first i had to use my imagination to describe how i thought Mr Goodwin's car. Then we played a little game Mr Goodwin did not tell us the name but it was so fun. What we played was a writing game we had to get in to a group of three and had to write a sentence each on our Chromebook then change laptops.

Naomi Wanted Poster Activity - Template

Walt: understand perceptions

task description : this is my dragon and i had to read a school journal before I did this activity.












Walt: understand perceptions
task description: this is my princess and like my other picture I read a school journal and had to do this activity.

Naomi Comic Writing Template

Walt: use onomatopoeia in our writing.

BOOM!!  Black canary hits the big orange giant. ZOOM!! Green arrow comes in with a lot of new arrows., “ hey Black Canary want to see my new arrows” Green arrow said, “ the last time you had new arrows you almost blew up the whole city and nearly killed us” black canary said.

“Nearly i am going to try them thanks” green arrow said. whack!! The helium arrow, mightiest arrow, ooze arrow, magnetic arrow, bug-size arrow but that one did not work out as planned he turned tiny then with a blink of an eye he turned bigger than ever. “sorry “ green arrow said, Bang!!! Wrecking ball arrow. POW!! Smashing the big oranges bricks black canary was mad at green arrow.

The last arrow was the best one ever the got to go arrow. “Green arrow” black canary said with a angry voice. THE END

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Task description: what I did was I had to listen to my teacher miss ayton to know what I was going to do. The next thing was to do another presentation it was a comic book presentation. then I had to do this writing with speech, onomatopoeia and story that is like how many sentences I am going to do.