Wednesday, 15 June 2016
Monster character descriptions
Task description: This presentation is all about how we describe characters. Also we had to make up how we think what these monsters personality and what do they look like.
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Mr Goodwin,
Naomi,
pt England,
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Friday, 10 June 2016
40 hour famine writing
Superhero writing
In a peaceful village iron man was relaxing until he got a phone call from his teammates, he got a call saying “ Iron man we need you quick the ultron’s have invaded earth. Oh No how could this happen. Iron man rushed to his closet grabbed his suit and got quickly dressed. Racing out to the city iron man saw heaps of spaceships. “ Avengers Assemble” Hawk eye said.
“ We need to get the people away from the spaceships and the ultron robots” scarlet said, Pow hawk eye shot from his arrow hitting the robots. “ quicksilver use your super-speed to wrap the robots together” captain america said with a loud voice. They all raced to the spaceships and tried to destroy the ultron’s. The ultron’s were so slow so the avengers had to go to the next bunch.
“ There are too much robots do you think we can defeat them all” captain america said frighteningly . They had no choice but to use their secret ability it is to use all of their powers at the same time and put it all into Thor's hammer. “ It is too dangerous we might die” black widow said with a frown. “ it’s our only hope” hawk-eye said “ OK let's do it” scarlet said.
So they all did it and put their powers into Thor's hammer, BOOM!! The ground was shaking. Thor hit the ground with his hammer he tried his best. It was so foggy they couldn't see if the robots were defeated or not. They look around and they saw no robots just defeated ones that are on the ground. “YAY we did it without dieing” black widow said.
“Let’s celebrate on me” thor said happily, they all went to the acade “oh no some kid got his hands stuck in the bowling ball. “ I will get the butter” captain america said then they all laughed” hahahaha”. So they all lived with joy after defeating the robots. THE END
Thursday, 9 June 2016
Naomi Problem Solving Practice Term 2 Wk 5
Task description: what I did was to do this presentation but before I did this i had to know what i had to do. then I had to go on this presentation and do my work. I struggled at first but I worked it out in my maths book now I solved it and I am pretty sure with my answer.
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2016,
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maths,
Mr Goodwin,
Naomi,
pt England,
pt england school,
room 10,
term two
Wednesday, 8 June 2016
Mr Goodwin's new car
Walt: write a what you imagin mr goodwin's car look's like
Description of the car
RMMM RMMM Mr Goodwin's new car is grey like the clouds at night and it can connect Mr G’s music from his phone without any cords, it also has 5 seats with a tv at the top and has 4 cup holders 2 in the front and 2 at the back. It is tall as a tree and can go 75 mph and has a cool boot with heaps of messy stuff in there but it can hold 5 fold up chairs and 2 suitcases. His car is subaru and it cost $2,785 and it is not a rip off if it has a tv in it.
The story of the car
As I was strolling through Glen Innes I saw the coolest car in the universe, even though we live in a cheap suburb. I’ve always wanted to buy a new car as grey as clouds, hey wake up wake up
Oh it was just a dream. “No it’s not it is real you are looking at my new car i brought it was not cheap, it’s your teacher the one who has BIG muscles do you remember me?
Yes of course the dude who teaches me in class with the big muscles bigger then Mr Moran’s. “May I show off”,said Mr G. I said,”SURE”. I tell him to give me 2 seconds “Yeah”,He said. I turn around and make a Jealousy face. “ Wow “ this is the coolest car ever “ Mr can you pick me up and drop me off from school every day now” i said “ i would love to but you're too smelly to put in the car”.
Task description: what i had to do was first i had to use my imagination to describe how i thought Mr Goodwin's car. Then we played a little game Mr Goodwin did not tell us the name but it was so fun. What we played was a writing game we had to get in to a group of three and had to write a sentence each on our Chromebook then change laptops.
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2016,
a new car,
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Mr Goodwin,
Naomi,
room 10,
room ten,
term 1,
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Friday, 3 June 2016
Naomi superhero story
On a peaceful day with the birds chirping the sun shining iron man was relaxing on his day off. Then suddenly he hears an unpeaceful sound “ I wonder what that sound was” iron man said. It was kids screaming! But Why? iron man thought, he looked outside his window and the robots have come from a spaceship .
“ They are going to destroy Pt England school” iron man said with a deep angry voice, with a blink of an eye iron man raced to the school and finds a lot of robots. Iron man tried to call the avengers for help but they were on another mission they were getting hulk's head out of the tuba again. “ What I guess it's just me then” iron man said.
BOOM!! BASH!! KA-POW! Iron man took three robots down, ok now i have to get the kids out of the classes iron man thought WOOOO the fire alarm went off to get the kids quickly moving. “Now that the kids are gone me and the robots can destroy you and the school” the leader of the robots said.
RING RING The avengers called they got hulk's head out of the tuba and now they can fight with him” avengers assemble”. Boom!! “ HULK SMASH” Hulk took down 30 of the robots now 113 to go. POW!! BASH!! BANG!! BOOM!! WHAM!! They destroyed 87 robots now 26 to go “I got this” hulk said “Hulk Smash” he destroyed all of the robots.
But there was still one more it was the leader he was strong, huge and undefeatable. Trying their best their was nothing to do except for one thing “it is to dangerous” said black widow, “it’s our only hope” said thor. “ fine but if we die then the robot is going to destroy everyone” said black widow.
They all huddled up using everyone’s power putting it all in thor’s hammer. They did anything to help the poor kids. “Thor throw it” said Clint barton. With all thor’s power he threw his hammer to the huge robot to destroy him. “ He is destroyed Yay we did it without getting killed.
YAY!! They defeated them Ok now we have to fix the school. After building the school it looked brand new. The Avengers replaced all of the devices and the students did a big thank you to the avengers and especially Iron man for hearing us and saving us. After a hard day of work they all celebrated at the arcade. OH No a kid got stuck in a claw machine. Hahaha The END
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