Tuesday, 16 February 2016

narrative story

Walt: understand the features of narrative writing.

Once upon a time there a girl called Memory and a boy called jake and they were brother and sister. They were at school doing their maths and it was nearly home time. They were both fighting and had to stay after school in detention.


The both of them were screaming at each other loud that the earth cracked into two parts.The class split in two parts Memory was on the right and jake on the left they were so worried they forgot why they were even fighting about.



The class split in two parts Memory was on the right and jake on the left they were so worried they forgot why they were even fighting about. Memory and jake both said sorry then the big crack in the world came together then Memory said ’’ Let's never fight again’’  jake took Memory to KFC Then they started to fight again about who is going to have the last chicken. DUN DUN DUNNNN


Task description: what we learned was we made our own story and even planed it but had to high light what we needed in our story.

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