My writing test review

Writing:
Pt england beach, the GI library, the internet cafe and Pt england school. They are all so special, don’t you think? Well I think so! Do you have a special place in the community? Well I do, and I am here to share my special place with you.

My special place in the community is the marist rugby club. Why? Well first of all they are so welcoming. Last year I started playing tackle rugby for the marist rugby club. I was so scared to play because everyone knows that rugby is known as a “Boy sport” and I was scared if they would think i was weak because I was a girl. As weeks went by, Trainings got harder But I started to feel more comfortable and felt welcomed to the team. That is the first reason why Marist rugby club is so special to me.

Playing with the boys was hard. That’s why we needed to work as a team and stick together. Marist rugby club is not just welcoming but they can work together well too! Teamwork plays a big role when it comes to playing rugby, Because without teamwork we would be freestyling and have no game play. My second reason I think that marist rugby club is so special is because when I needed help to tackle someone down they had my back and helped me take them down.

I think marist rugby club is special, not only because they are welcoming and they have great teamwork. But the marist rugby club is special to me because the people were so nice and kind. If they weren't nice and kind, the marist rugby club wouldn’t be as special as it is now. So my third reason why the marist rugby club is special is because the of how nice and kind they were to me.

So now you know all the reasons why marist rugby club is special to me. Being welcoming, Working as a team and being nice and kind make the marist rugby club special to me.

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this is my writing test work and this was an explanation writing. This is my special place. My writing task for this week was to check  our writing with a buddy and post the review on our blog I had no partner but I am just going to fix up my own mistakes. so this link will take you to My review on my writing test. Link: https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/19jArlJx8fEMpGF7105w9bYkKXHmR43xrceThKNDMJ3E/edit?usp=sharing

Being test ready!

This week we are finishing off unfinished work and this was just lying in my google drive so I decided to finish of this. This task is a practice test for last week, since testing was coming around the corner we decided to do a practice test. there is a lot of questions that we had to answer most of them were about our vocabulary and how well we knew the words in the story.

Mahy Reading group

1. My reading group name is Mahy so that must mean that Magaret Mahy is who I am researching about.

a. Magaret Mahy was born on the 21st of march in 1936 and unfortunately died on the 23rd of July 2012.

b.  she is the eldest of her five siblings, she was born and raised in whakatane. her dad would often tell her and her siblings short stories and that influenced Magaret Mahy to start writing short stories.

c. Link to books

Are you a good Role model

Are you a good role model?

By Naomi

Are you a Good role model? Do you want to be a good role model? Well if you do, then you have come to the right place. I will be covering 3-4 different  ideas in each paragraph. 

First of all if you are a role model I think that being kind would make you a Good role model. Because being kind plays a big role in Being a good role model. Showing kindness and being kind can be really inspirational to little kids. Because if you do something kind then little kids will follow in your footsteps and do something kind as well.

Secondly I think that taking responsibility is also good when you are being a role model. Taking responsibility means when someone is being disrespectful you need to take responsibility. Also have a talk with that person, it doesn’t have to be a harsh talking to. Just let them know that it is not respectful.

Thirdly, Being a good role model means you need to stay positive. If times are tough just be positive and fight through the pain. Keeping a smile on your face means a lot. If you stay positive no matter what it will show little kids that there is always a bright side to everything.

Taking responsibility, being positive and being kind are just a few things that make a good role model. If you have these 3 things then are an amazing role model. If you don’t then don’t worry just try your best and you will get there. Overall I think that being a good role model means having a big heart and being kind to everyone around you. That is What I think makes a good role model.

Task description:

Our writing for this week and last week was all about being a good role model. Most of us seniors are leaders so we should have a fair idea of what being a good role model means. This writing is explanation writing, meaning I am trying to explain what a good role model does or means.