Pt england beach, the GI library, the internet cafe and Pt england school. They are all so special, don’t you think? Well I think so! Do you have a special place in the community? Well I do, and I am here to share my special place with you.
My special place in the community is the marist rugby club. Why? Well first of all they are so welcoming. Last year I started playing tackle rugby for the marist rugby club. I was so scared to play because everyone knows that rugby is known as a “Boy sport” and I was scared if they would think i was weak because I was a girl. As weeks went by, Trainings got harder But I started to feel more comfortable and felt welcomed to the team. That is the first reason why Marist rugby club is so special to me.
Playing with the boys was hard. That’s why we needed to work as a team and stick together. Marist rugby club is not just welcoming but they can work together well too! Teamwork plays a big role when it comes to playing rugby, Because without teamwork we would be freestyling and have no game play. My second reason I think that marist rugby club is so special is because when I needed help to tackle someone down they had my back and helped me take them down.
I think marist rugby club is special, not only because they are welcoming and they have great teamwork. But the marist rugby club is special to me because the people were so nice and kind. If they weren't nice and kind, the marist rugby club wouldn’t be as special as it is now. So my third reason why the marist rugby club is special is because the of how nice and kind they were to me.
So now you know all the reasons why marist rugby club is special to me. Being welcoming, Working as a team and being nice and kind make the marist rugby club special to me.
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this is my writing test work and this was an explanation writing. This is my special place. My writing task for this week was to check our writing with a buddy and post the review on our blog I had no partner but I am just going to fix up my own mistakes. so this link will take you to My review on my writing test. Link: https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/19jArlJx8fEMpGF7105w9bYkKXHmR43xrceThKNDMJ3E/edit?usp=sharing
Hey Naomi, I love your blog post because of how much writing you do! It's a nice way to show your learning, and how you do in your learning time. What I think you should do is add maybe images to express the look of characters or if you were writing about your holiday you could try take a photo or make a image to go with it?
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