back in da day (production)

I really loved the production and the best thing about it was how we all worked as a team and people like makayla, paikea and aj had to learn new bits off by heart in a day. I loved our dance and how we all worked together to make it and when we performed it, it was amazing. I do not think I would want to change it but if I could make it better I would say that we needed one more day to learn our scripts and learn when we are going to say it, because heaps of people were talking over people but that’s okay. It was also funny because when we were on all of the little kids in the front were clapping for us when our dance was over. To be honest I was so scared, I don’t know why but I thought that I was going to forget my lines (even though I did not have many lines) . I really liked how when we were not on stage our friends would always encourage us to not be scared on stage. Also the thing that I could do better is put more expression into what I was saying, because I am the mum I need to put more anger into what I said.  Overall I would say that we did an amazing, awesome, magnificent and wonderful job.

research/EXT

Maori tribe group video

Maori Tribe Group from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

Naomi water cycle

Naomi water cycle from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

Task Description: For ch.ch.ch.ch Changes My Extension group learned about water cycles. We learned about condensation, Evaporation and Precipitation. I also did an animation to show my learning. Why we did this is so we can learn how the changing states of matter works.  

Naomi Olympics

Naomi Olympics2 from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

practice Argument

Pt England school

130 Pt England road

Pt England

Auckland

NZ

Thursday 25 August 2016

Dear Prime Minister John Key,

Kia ora my name is Naomi and I am a year 5 at Pt England School. This letter is about pollution and plastic waste getting thrown into the drain leading to the sea. The problem about pollution and plastic waste is that this rubbish is ending up down the drain. It can affect the fishes in the sea. It can also affect our birds because they go down to the sea and look for fishes but they might see plastic waste and might think it is a fish and could eat it and that can make them die. With all the fish gone fishing can no longer be a hobby. People won’t be able to eat fish n chips.

I think that you should make a law saying “ There should be no one ever to litter in the drains or they will have to pay”. They might listen but here is another idea we can have a event like a competition whoever fills three bags of rubbish gets a prize or something like that. Or we can have more workers to clean out the drain and also John Key I think they should get more money.

The workers should get more money because they are cleaning the rubbish that was going to the sea. The rubbish in the sea can also make our water dirty and with dirty water no one wants to drink it and with no water we will not live. So we need to get all of the garbage in the sea out or we would not live.  

Your’s sincerely,

Naomi  

Naomi Maori warrior

Naomi maori warrior from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

here is my animation for my warrior and I am sorry if it is so long it just messed up when I tried to edit it on imovie.

my maori warrior

His heart was pounding as the giant moa chased after him. He felt like he couldn’t move his legs. But luckily he  managed to escape the moa. In the cold forest the Maori warrior still heard the moas voice screeching loudly.  The warrior had interesting tattoos covering his body. His clothes were made with only leaves and feathers. Soon he became so tired and went to sleep on the forest floor.

In the morning the warrior was woken up by a familiar sound. It was the moa. “How did it find me?” he said. It had followed his footprints and used its sense of smell. Once again the warrior ran through the forest. Looking back he could see that the moa was getting closer and closer. His heart was pounding like never before. Running for his life he took a big breath of air before he jumped off a cliff and into the ocean.

Landing in the ocean the warrior struggled to get back to shore. As he stepped out of the water he found some leaves and dried himself clean. But the leaves were poisonous! “OH no!” he screamed before he fainted. After several hours, the warrior woke up to find several moa surrounding him. He felt frightened and quickly stood up. He tried running left, right, up and down but he kept on getting knocked to the middle by the moa.

Suddenly the warrior realised that he was surrounded by mother nature. He thought to himself “I should fight back!”. At that instant the warrior ran to a tree and broke down a sharp branch and started to point it at the moa. He swung the branch like a taiaha. But the warrior only killed one moa. The rest ran back into the forest. The warrior was lucky to survive.

Task description: this picture is a drawing drawn by me and this writing you may notice this it was from a my blog too. I am showing you my story and my drawing now to show that this picture has to match my writing about a maori warrior.

my maori warrior

His heart was pounding as the giant moa chased after him. He felt like he couldn’t move his legs. But luckily he  managed to escape the moa. In the cold forest the Maori warrior still heard the moas voice screeching loudly.  The warrior had interesting tattoos covering his body. His clothes were made with only leaves and feathers. Soon he became so tired and went to sleep on the forest floor.

In the morning the warrior was woken up by a familiar sound. It was the moa. “How did it find me?” he said. It had followed his footprints and used its sense of smell. Once again the warrior ran through the forest. Looking back he could see that the moa was getting closer and closer. His heart was pounding like never before. Running for his life he took a big breath of air before he jumped off a cliff and into the ocean.

Landing in the ocean the warrior struggled to get back to shore. As he stepped out of the water he found some leaves and dried himself clean. But the leaves were poisonous! “OH no!” he screamed before he fainted. After several hours, the warrior woke up to find several moa surrounding him. He felt frightened and quickly stood up. He tried running left, right, up and down but he kept on getting knocked to the middle by the moa.

Suddenly the warrior realised that he was surrounded by mother nature. He thought to himself “I should fight back!”. At that instant the warrior ran to a tree and broke down a sharp branch and started to point it at the moa. He swung the branch like a taiaha. But the warrior only killed one moa. The rest ran back into the forest. The warrior was lucky to survive.

Task description: this picture is a drawing drawn by me and this writing you may notice this it was from a my blog too. I am showing you my story and my drawing now to show that this picture has to match my writing about a maori warrior.

40 hour famine writing

I am taking part in this years 40 hour famine and I am in the yellow team with one the edge person and one of the smash person as my team leader. Why we are doing this is to donate for the people in Syria and we had to do the 20 hour famine because we are only kids in primary. What i've been up to so far is just playing in the hall, playing basketball, and doing karaoke, my favourite part was when we had to do our group item my team came last but who cares it was only year 5's creating the dance and one year 8 dancing with us.

 

descriptive writing

Naomi Setting Description Task

task description:what i did was i had to start with my character description presentation then I had to listen to miss langitupu. then I had to do this presentation using the words in the presentation.

Naomi Character Descriptions Task

Naomi group movie

Richard Group MTV from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.
I worked with Makayla,Richard and Justice. Take a look at this amazing movie about what we do at Pt England.